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Story for Jedi and others

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 5:51 pm
by Wannahelp1
If we have Jedi and all, then perhaps there should be a Jedi storyline in which we raise our Jedi from when they are young. Before you begin, you'd be asked if you were a Jedi or Sith.

Jedi: You customize the babies apperance that is cemented but still customizable as you age. Then it shows you in a bundle, giving to a pair of Jedi knights who say you are a : Lone Survior of your world, the Chosen one, adorable, have great potential. (You'd choose, and this directs your story and the abilities given to you. Then it shows the Jedi take you, and go into the majestic temple of the Jedi. It thens shows a list, from year one all the way up to final mission. Year one is you as a baby, and you choose three ablities that will then foster and be yours permanantly as the character. EX- force push, force pull, force ball( a ball of pure energy. Kills any life around but grows in damage per that life's life amount. Year two, you are allowed to change yourself, and practice agility and the movement of your character. Year three is when you learn to pilot ships, and you get your own, fully customizable with dozens of guns and shields. Year four is when you get your first mission, or year ten if you are a human( as they age slower than most other races). It may be to take something from the Senate, or to dispatch a group of droids. You level up faster if you go alone, or you can take a fully customizable squad of clones with you. This decides whether you are a lone Jedi or a team player for the rest of the game, but some missions will require you go alone. When you finally pass the final mission, your character will be allowed to be put on the Multiplayer database, or you can use them personally if you are chosen to be the hero. The final mission has you have to kill a Sith leader and his padawan, as they come to retrieve to the Sith artifacts you stole in an earlier mission. As you almost defeat him( and if you're above a level twenty), he'll plead with you to join him and be a Sith leader like him. You can change to Sith if you want, or you can say, "I've already defeated you. What else could you teach me that you didn't try?)Then you'd kill him and be promoted and put into the database for service in multiplayer battles. That way you don't have 60 Darth Mauls running around, but a true variety that shows the Star Wars Universe.

Sith: (Customise, and you are not a baby but a young boy)You dragged roughly by two cloaked Sith. You were caught for : Stealing, murder, talk of rebellion, you didn't do anything but the Sith don't believe you. Hint the last two answers will get you killed early on. Sith like those who only think of survival, and so you are brought before one, who sees a fire in your eyes. He says he has found his new apprentice, and your life as a Sith padawan begins. You are told to defeat the two Sith holding you, and they don't take you seriously, until you draw a two lightsabers( or one, your choice. Double-Bladed and Two double-bladed are also allowed) The Sith realize you pickpocketed them of their lightsabers or saber, and you dispatch them with ease. The Sith leader smiles; you have earned his favor. The years go from year one to final mission, but the Sith campaign is much harder due to your ablities(Sith can do so much more than the Jedi). Year one allows you to pick abilites( ex: force catapult( slams an individual into an object if there is one), force surf( teleports you twenty feet in any direction), obliteration(blows apart anything into tiny bits). Year two does agility. Year three plunges you into a space battle where you have to learn on the job. If you are viscious when you board and leave no survivors, killing even the women and defenseless, you gain power and level up. Taking prisoners lowers yourself, and you will have to fight as punishment against managuards, which are very hard at your level. Year four gives you your first battle against a Jedi. The final mission has you have to steal Sith artifacts back from the Jedi in the Jedi temple, meaning you must fight tens of Jedi masters, although your powers will be of great help. If you succede, you then go back to your master and are given the option to kill him when his guard is down, join him, or battle him as you find out why you are an orphan. Throughtout the story your story comes to past and you find he tortured and killed your father, a Sith commander, to steal your mother, although he killed her. If victorious, many see your battle, and you become in charge of the Sith planet, where your Sith can be added to the database. Killing your master however, you can choose to turn good, and bring the compound down with your powers

During the story, you have five lives to complete a mission. Failure results in you having to restart all over from year one, while success adds on another five lives. This will keep from having an influx of players who win, and you may only add to the database once you have won on padawan, master, and Sage. Other stories include you as a clone, droid, rebel, or Stormtrooper and you progressing through many battles as the world around you transitions from Clone Wars to the Galactic Empire, changing the weapons and armor you'll be able to use. So that's all I have for story. There will only be allowed twenty new Jedi and Sith, so that should encourage some competition, although players can vote on how effective the character was, and a character with 1000 dislikes gets erased from the database of Jedi. Any thoughts or questions please leave below, and check out my collaboration piece. I think you'll like it...

Re: Story for Jedi and others

Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:40 pm
by unit220
I like a lot of it but I dont like how your single player character can be eraised by sucking at multi player. I would say that if u suck at multi player then u won't likely get to play as the hero or some penalty of the sort but I don't want the general public controlling my data. (cuz come on we here in the general public are kinda ass holes)

Re: Story for Jedi and others

Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 9:46 am
by Wannahelp1
Very good point...I like the penalty thing a lot...